Wednesday, March 5, 2008

'GREEN' by me... :)

my first attempt at poetry after a long long time... in response to a topic given in one of the threads on IAW Community on orkut...

green is nature... green is wilderness... green is the sea... green is me...
green is foliage... green is freedom... green is my favourite saree... green is me...
green are my cat's eyes... green in my mind are some lies... green is jealousy... green is me...
green is fresh... green is jade.... with time green fades... into infinity...
green was before... green is now... green will always be... with me, within me...

3 comments:

Siddharth said...

its so green , that i felt like saying GREEN ... keep going !! nice attempt ...
was there a competition betwn u and some1 abt " who says green more meaningful " then i guess .... u should be wining , and if its sole participant in tht competition then u should get first prize ... lol !!

rohit said...

green is the magical little poem, my friend mrunal has written !

YogeshB said...

its good.
i tried to think on the same in marathi ;)...but i did not get the correct words :(

naad sodla.

Yogesh